ELA prompt December 1st, 2012
What would happen if children ruled the world?
If children ruled the world, humanity would be a lot more fun. There would be desserts for breakfast and not a vegetable in sight! The adults would become the servants. Little boys and girls would demand orders at their parents, "mother! father!, go clean your room, then fetch me a root beer!!!!" Of course there would be no principals, because there would be no school for kids!!!! The adults would go to school though. Every adult would get up each day at 6 AM and go to school. They would be dismissed at 2 PM. While the adult were at school the children would do what children do best. They would play. Even though the children would refuse any consideration of going to school until they were adult, they would actively use their minds for creativity. They would spend all day laughing and creating new games and exploring. Once the adults got back from school they would either go out to eat or call in a pizza. Their meal beverages would consist of either chocolate milk or apple juice. Taxes and incomes were not a problem to anyone because they used game money instead. No family went without! Even though someone might think that a world run by children would be a chaotic place, it would really just be a more creative world.
~Leah :)
That was so good Leah! It would be fun if kids ruled the world! You are right it would be a really creative world if the kids ruled it.
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Hi Leah! Nice job on your freewrite. I absolutely LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your enthusiasm about the idea of kids ruling the world instead of adults. That absolutely poured through in every sentence you constructed. I have to say that I often think that the world would be a much more fun, carefree place if kids ran it, however, I also know that kids tend to be impulsive and not think things through or look at the bigger picture. So, maybe that's why they can't rule the world. But it would be fun to let them do it for a day every now and then.
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I see how the world would become a much more fun place! The world for kids would be like a giant toy box! However, I believe that if kids ruled the worlds and all the adults were in school, at first it would seem wonderful, but eventually who would make the food and houses... and toys! Although I think that they would find a much more creative and simpler way of living if children ruled the world. Great Paragraph Leah!
ReplyDeleteLeah, I totally agree with you that it would be awesome if children ruled the world not adults. The world would be so much more fun because we could do anything we wanted. I liked how you put so much detail in this, you even said what they would have for meals. Also, you had so many points on how the world would be better. But, wouldn't eventually the world run out of things like chocolate milk or pizza because there would be nobody working to make those things. Overall, great paragraph Leah!
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